By – Sangu Mandanna
Fiction, romance, literature, fantasy
Narrator Samara MacLaren
Audiobook 10 hours (approx.)
I had a hard time finishing this one. I got 77% through and took a break. I did end up coming back to finish when I ran out of more captivating books.
In those last couple hours of the book a new unexpected challenge came up. Since it doesn’t show up till the end of the book you know it will be quickly resolved. I was disappointed that the conflict that was promised to us from the beginning was more of a non-issue.
The underlying story really isn’t bad. In my opinion, it needs to be rearranged and shortened. Perhaps a new perspective where we can clearly see the conflict that shows up at the end of the book. Also, we need a better understanding of Primrose (the leading lady’s guardian and lead witch).